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[Maybe - A Farmer's Tale]

I'm sorry but

Without subtitles I can barely catch the English language.

It's far more easier to read a foreign language than to understand it vocally.

Stampini responds:

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Surprisingly, very little extra work in producing a Spanish version but I want to do a Cantonese version first.

Bob

[BreatheCarolinaTypography]

You can use comercial audio

But you must keep your work out of any newground contest.

Just informing.
Nice work.

MostlyAwesome responds:

I'm aware.
Thanks.

[La vida de un animador]

Aw men, you suck!

Kidding.

¿Sabes inglés?Deberías de hacer subtítulos en ese idioma para que te entienda la mayor gente posible, o si los haces en español, con Menos Faltas De Ortografía.

Por dios, siento que han violado a mi idioma.

Por el resto está.. "Bien", aunque lo que se dice animación no has hecho mucha.

DracxCompany responds:

LA VERDAD SI SE INGLES, PERO NO HABIA PENSADO EN SUBTITULOS EN INGLES, TE PROMETO QUE MI PROXIMO TYRABAJO SERA MEJOR XD.

[Evil Joe Trailer]

The fallowing review

Thinks that yau shauld keep an aye for arthagraphy.

rvendetta responds:

thanx for the comment.. as i told, i sux at animation.. but I will get better at it =)

[Madness Baseball]

Non violent madness..

..ISN'T MADNESS.

Well actually I gave you a 3/5, actually you did a good job there.

But men, call it "stick dudes" or something, not madness.

nuke505 responds:

that is exactly what i told my teacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! believe me i was completely forced to have it be nonviolent!

[Mouthless episode 1]

Hi, first of all. Yes, it's first, not "frist".

Second point. It just moves too slow.

3rd. Well, short to the point that cannot even be called an introduction.

[Mazimo - The Drill Master]

Hi.

So you'r starting? Nice! I hope you enjoy your new hobby.

I'm not even a neophyte at animation, but, I can give you some advices about two things "not related" to it.

1. Making a good story.

2. Making a good piece of madness.

For the second point, there's anything I can say better than: http://www.newgrounds.com/collection/
madness

Watch.

And, for the first point.. well, I like to read. I'm one of the aliens in human costume who makes everyone be jealous because he knows how to use a book.

You can do two things if you want to make more than "Sticks killing each other for twenty seconds" (But if you'r gonna do the awaited title "Two days of stick fighting", please, do it) before starting to work you need to focus.

You can divide any story in three parts. Introduction, development and outcome.

If you'r missing one, you'r only.. well, you'r just making a whole bunch of sticks killing each other without reason.

I'm not talking about "You killed my father" or "You killed my girl-friend" or anything related or Even close to Twilight.

I'm talking about that you dont really need to explain why the world is nuts. You just need to explain why your character keeps going around killing people.

Got it? You can make the story yourself and make something good out of your brain.

The other way is making any guy to write it down.

Mazimo responds:

GOT IT!!!! ^^ ill try to come up with a nice story next time thx alot